luxpacis: The Light would come to play with me —
The Light would come to play with me —Another poetry plug. I know I keep doing it. It's three stanzas long, so click on the link to get there. As you can see, it's styled like Emily Dickinson. I have a slightly different (original) version in 360.
To cast itself along.
My shadow shuddered at the Light
And said, "I don't belong."
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I always have the feeling there's something that I could improve, to make the impact greater. How do I personify the shadow into a real person? Should I use "another light" or "the second light"? Hmm.
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